seriously nice
pretty sweet. it sort of loses energy at around 2:09 and it takes alittle too long for my tastes to regain it.
it has a lot of energy, i like it. :)
for literal, direct, helpful advice,, i think that adding a 1% pitch randomizer to that generic snare, and all the samplers really, would do wonders (piano roll>tools>randomizer) uncheck pattern and check levels, then drag "pitch" the tiniest fraction up. it adds a lubtle variation that makes the whole thing sound more real.
(btw, if you alreay know how to use the randomizer sorry for being patronizing but better that than leaving someone saying "how the hell do i do that?" lol)